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You are my light that shines thru the darkness
If I'm to the bottom and have no where to go
I know I can think of you and all my problems
Are gone there no more. you are my everything
Thru bad thru good you are there and I know that now
You’re here till the end lets forget where we finish
Lets just work on the journey we will have our problems
But with you here I know we can make it I know we will last
             Lets have a blast.

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Written November 5th, 2005

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  • dendriapyro
    November 9, 2005
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    Kick ass

    I love this baby. Good job. Can I put it where it flows better tho? It's hard to read without puncuation or spacing and junk. Otherwise Excellent job. I love you baby. I hope I get off restriction soon so I can see you.