As I lay here in the grass
wishing you were here beside me
as the wind blows I hear you call my name
I cry back in reply
Clouds cover over me
the sun shining through
I know you are watching
trying to make this come true
Since you have been gone
I miss you even more
everything has went bad
after you left this world
You always made me laugh
put a smile on my face
but now your not here
and there hasn't been a trace
A teardrop on my cheek
I remember you are here
you'll never leave me
I just can't see...
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Coment if you may, I don't really care...
Written November 5th, 2005
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Thanks girly. I'm sure you loved your aunt. I don't like the last part of the last stanza. I didn't know what to put. Oh well. Yeah I miss my grandma all the time. But she is in a different and better place now. No more pain and suffering. I saw you changed your name. Sounds good. I think I am gonna change mine I just don't know what I'm changing it to yet. Thanks for the comment. Well, talk to ya soon.
~My Dark World~ -
You took the words right out of my mouth,!!
O SO TRUE!! everyword in this poem can be related too. I just lost my aunt and I feel your pain. I know how hard it is to lose someone that was close to you. And things have gotten fulled with more distress then before. You have painted a wonderful yet deressing picture for your readers. ( usually the best picture is the one with the more sorrow) You have had a successful write. I can't explain to you how much I feel your pain. It brings tears to my eyes reading this poem. You took the workds right out of my mouth for the feeling of a lost loved one.
Stay strong.
Miss you.Sorry I havent been on for a while. I changed my name one here. Needed a change you know, I wanted something more powerful then just my name ("Britny") I mean a name a lone is powerful, but you know how it is. Vriety is needed in life so I switched my name. lol
Hope your doing well hun.
I'll talk to you soon.
-Britny-
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