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Circles of Love Repeat



October is a harvest time of bounty,
November's Thanksgiving in city and county.
December is a celebration of Christmas,
January first leads to New Year's kisses .

February is sweetheart Valentine's Day,
March blows in pastel Easter Display.
April showers do bring May flowers,
June is wedding rice flowing showers.

July is hotter then a lite firecracker,
August still hot makes dog days slackers.
September rains bring us full circle again,
celebrate life it's meant to my friend.

Beginnings and endings are all part yours and mine,
celebrate loved ones ,you'll see them in time.

              ~~~Suseann~~~


   

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Written November 5th, 2005

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  • Blue Rew silver member
    September 1, 2007

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    Wonderful! You share insight into cycles of all life here...parting with seasons of our lives and those we love. But still to have faith the circles come 'round.
    Blue


  • Autumn Whisper
    May 21, 2006
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    Very good poem suseann, I like the way you have included all the months and made them rhyme and work so well, well done suseann.
    best wishes as always
    xElectricEyezx


  • grannyeri gold member
    February 4, 2006
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    Very creative poem you have written here - liked the descriptions of each month and the knowing that they will come around again - a circle recycled.


  • suseann
    November 10, 2005
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    Thank you for contemplating that image Grossmutti. I love that image.It bring eternity to my mind.But also the twists and turns a life takes us through.But to tell the truth of why I used it on the piece.It was to show the year coming full circle to it's begining season.~~~Suseann


  • nichtmich silver member
    November 10, 2005
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    Adorable

    Something inspirational for each month of the year Great flow and imagery. At first I was wondering what the picture was about, but I see each shiny piece is a neverending creation like that of a wedding ring...and your poem


  • Leance
    November 6, 2005
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    Thank you for entering the contest suseann.................
    Best of luck to you..................................
    Leance


  • Lyrical Soul silver member
    November 5, 2005
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    Nice job suseann. You've definately completed the circle here. Well done and good luck in the contest.
    ~Lyrical


  • Sherry gold member
    November 5, 2005
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    Yet making the best of it now while on earth....

  • Sherry gold member
    November 5, 2005
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    Suseann,
    You decribed the months well and reflected them nicely your ending is filled with hope and beautifully expressed. Through the changes the comfort of seeing those again. Hugs,Sherry

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