Smile when you're happy
Smile when you're sad
Smile when you win
Smile when you lose
Smile all the time
A smile will warm cold hearts
A smile will comfort too
Turn that frown upside down, smile for a while
Smile, smile, smile.
Author notes
Written November 5th, 2005
A contest entry
- Cascadent Form by Janice M Pickett.
300 points, ended November 9, 2005, 11 entries
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Absolutely. Smile all the time, it brings others happiness. Great job and a wonderful write. Thank you so much.
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You forgot to add a smile line, where one is handling with whining customers (like I do each day in this shop
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Anyway, a light subject you have written about, but definately radiating a strong message within the words.
Thank you for entering the contest, I wish you the very best!
Leander -
Well this certainly makes one smile
great write, good luck!
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More smiles...
An optimist's mantra?
'Smile when you win
smile when you lose'
great advice for being a good sport.
It's nice how line 8 rhymes with smile. A pretty nice set up for the finish.
Mike -
Goodnes me another excellent entry,
Thankyou -
Well, just smiled while reading this one. Very light and refreshing. Thanks for the smile.
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