The watcher waited out time
Northern Lights stretch long across the sky
Fire tingles against heavens touch
Clouds burn hot
Planets fall out of alignment
Changes cause chaos
Break patient interfere
The end forces us awake
Author notes
once again....I can't explain it....
Written November 5th, 2005
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wow perfect example of a short but sweet poem. Great write.
love,
Auntie -
hmm...beautiful, i loved it. You captured something that I've been straining to capture for so long a sense of peace in writing..well done, Farewell, Crow
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Thanks mommy
I have been playing with those little word magnets, its how I come up with most of my poems, it is easy to keep them short that way
~Char -
Great
Short but it makes you think. I like it daughter. Keep up the great work.
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