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empty space


In empty space I lie
 In empty space it's true,
conceives in blackness thoughts,
 Oh how I yearn for you,
         When in that empty space,
 I entertain your gentle face,
      pressed like a cattle brand
       upon my beating heart

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Written November 4th, 2005

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  • FrodoLIVES
    November 13, 2005
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    Good job! I love it!

  • Irishfreckles87
    November 4, 2005
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    wow. I liked this poem. Very interesting format. Sometimes, short poems just work and in this case, it works for you. Very universal, yet at the same time personal. wonderful job