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Arrogance- I am Slaton

aggressively emphatic am I
right but never wrong whatever my idea
reality pays homage to my glorious selfism
obscurity secured by the witless
genial
a
natural failing to regret
caustic reminders do echo
every word to never have been spoken

Author notes

hi a double ended acrostic to tickle your creative juices
Written November 4th, 2005

A contest entry

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  • Slaton
    June 7
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  • M.A.King
    November 6, 2005
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    And you certainly have tickled my creative juices. Fascinating on several levels. You are very blunt and honest in your self portrait here. Few would own up to these traits in such abundance.
    Unique form and skillfully accomplished. Thank you for this entry.


  • angelica silver member
    November 5, 2005
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    Very cleverly written to include a double ended Acrostic.

    Hugs Joan


  • xxemokevinxx
    November 5, 2005
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    woo!

    I love short poems and acrostics and I thought this was really witty and smart! Good job with this. I thought it was really cool and I love, love, love, love, love, loved it!
    -Love, me


  • MargaretG
    November 4, 2005
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    This double acrostic is very clever work! It is a rare person who would paint such an unflattering self-portrait. Your last three lines show the natural consequence, they are true and pointed. Good luck in the contest.

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