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Poppet

Don't make a sound, Precious, you'll see
I'm willing to be lenient with you, darling
I can see your perspiration sparkling
as you start screaming denied bliss for me

The excitement rises as you arch and plea
I watch with hungry eyes, your treasure glistening
Don't make a sound, Precious, you'll see
I'm willing to be lenient with you, darling

Come now, Poppet, scream my name to be free
Untainted as you are, innocence gleaming
I smile lovingly as I continue listening
I only hope you'll see the love I don't decree
Don't make a sound, Precious, you'll see...

Author notes

Another Sharazon/Kira write, obviously. Sharazon is copyrighted to Opaque Beauty.

Rondel - ABba abAB abbaA rhyme.

Inspired by Opaque Beauty's Industrial Whore!!! No, you nitwits, she doesn't actually HAVE a whore! It's the name of HER rondel!
Written November 4th, 2005

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  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    November 6, 2005
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    Don't fantasize too much!

  • ZorroTheFox silver member
    November 6, 2005
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    this was a fun read. Kinda reminded me of some of the fun that was had over the weekend. I just hope I will be able to focus at work tomorrow

  • Yunaleska gold member
    November 6, 2005
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    totally totally totally totally obssessed and that's all good! This is yet another great write. good luck in the contest.

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    November 5, 2005
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    Thank you and good luck with judging.

  • blkwidowsd
    November 5, 2005
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    Great write
    Thanks for entering, Goodluck.
    Best Wishes

    (¯`•.Tracey.•´¯)

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    November 5, 2005
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    Tony's not your indestrial whoooore...He's your fiance...THING... He might've been one in the past and stuff, considering, but THAT DOESN'T MATTER NOW!!! So...yes! I'm glad you liked this and such. <3

  • Victoria of Aragon
    November 5, 2005
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    AHAHAH! TECHNICALLY... Tony would be my Industrial Whore. ♥ BUT.. We won't get into that, because then it makes us both look back.. And if he's an Industiral Whore, then I am.. Too.. *Le Sigh.* MOVING ON!

    Rondels are pretty. *Nod, nod.* I'm thinking that I'll write ONE more, before I move on to my next style THINGER.. Or I might go back and do a Triolet and Tanka, just to make sure that I know.. HOW to do them. e e; I'm rambling; ain't it so pretty? ♥

    AND, and, and, and... Mm'hmm'; another lovely write, darling. Best of luck in the contest.
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