You got a lot to say
And I got a lot to hear
So dance in your black lace
And get down to a good time
Girl, I am here all for you
You and I are going to sweat all night long
(chorus)
Yea, heaven can close their gates
But our lust will grant us the way
Yea, hell can close their portal
But our love shall allow our passion
Overseen in the night, in the seraphim
That we are within the rose
Everyday filled with the dusk
The fall of the moon sides our desire
Everynight full for the sun
Setting off in the distance
My mind, your breast, our embrace
We set it off the orgasms
(repeat chorus)
Get it off your chest
No secrets to discover
We are one and the same
In love to the heart
For the passion revolves
I love you tonight
(repeat chorus twice)
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Written November 4th, 2005
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Your opening promised some meaningful communication but alas, I'm disappointed its all implied. The piece seems a celebration of endorphins, infatuation and youth; none to subtle. But I honestly believe markets being what they are... You may have a hit on your hands.
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Awesome
"Dance in your black lace" Nice imagery
I love the color black. Very good writing, uses emotion-stirring words. Keep up the good work! ~Rachel
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