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She Sits in the Corner

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She sits in the corner, scared and alone,
begging for God to call her home.
Her Daddy stumbles in, he’s drunk yet again,
she sobs, anticipating the coming pain.

He yells out for silence, with a voice so coarse,
then he picks her up with unshakeable force.
She screams in fear, and pleads for the ground,
but he squeezes her till she’s bereft of sound.

He slams her small body into the door,
and hits her as she cries, “Daddy, please, no more!”
The blood is congealing on her body and face,
and at least two bones have been pulled out of place.

Her Daddy is furious; he’s seeing red,
tomorrow he won’t recall what was done, what was said.
He’ll shower her with presents, with kisses and love,
but it will only last till he returns from the pub.

Her Mummy couldn’t care less; she’s never there,
the drugs keep her going; to see her is rare.
And even if she is home, she doesn’t hug or caress,
she just blames: “You’re the reason my life is a mess.”

The girl is now screaming, calling out for some aid,
she doesn’t care in what form; she just wants to be saved.
She senses she’s dying, but nobody comes,
she can hear her heart thumping like a great pair of drums.

And as her last breath expires, and she goes with a sigh,
she’s not at all afraid, but relieved to die.
No matter how drunk her Daddy is, he’ll remember this day,
for he killed his own daughter in this sickening way.

All her short life, she’s been so brave,
now from this hell she’s been living she’s finally saved.
She will never again feel scared or alone...
for God’s taken pity, and called her home.

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  • i love the meaning in this. good luck.


  • Frogzter gold member
    March 3

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    Wow! That was amazing and I can't believe it only got an HM. I am sitting here with a lump in my throat and tears in my eyes. This shredded my heart to pieces! I do believe in God and this story could be very real to some poor child out there who was indeed saved by his grace from further abuse! OMG! This one gave me chill bumps! Very well written~


  • Lime Ocarina
    March 2

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    One of those poems you could read over and over again and never cease to be amazed.
    I love the way that you put things, love.
    You truly are impressive as a person and a writer.

    Love,
    Dean.


  • Faerie.Princess
    August 7, 2006
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    this is an amazing poem, i love it. it shows so much pain that the girl goes through and how relieved she is to die. its a sad poem but happens to many children. great poem. good luck in the contest and keep writing
    Thankyou For Entering


  • Shantalina
    April 28, 2006
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    I *DO NOT* under ANY circumstances believe there is a god, but this poem pulled me. Its terrible and tragic, and someone or something saved that little girl. I dont know what it was, but something did. Great poem, it was beautifully written, and very well structured. The rhyming was almost perfect too. You did a great job. Good luck.

    Saddened Amber Eyes


  • fallout49
    April 10, 2006
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    maybe the world would be better off if you didn't take Science and Geography, and just wrote!! this is truly beautiful, and is reminiscent of a poem i once got in a chain letter "Sarah". thanks for the entry and good luck in the contest!


  • Ur Supergurl silver member
    January 5, 2006
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    well done

    wow...this is a beautifully ..well written piece. it reminds me of what happened to one of my friends when i was little. anyways, this write was touching and very very well written. i loved it. keep up the great work. -Sable-


  • zillion
    December 14, 2005
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    what a sad story! This kind of stuff happens way too much in society. Thanks for entering this and good luck in my contest,

    -Faithful Dreamer


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    December 6, 2005
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    I can relate to this! I have had friends in the past who've had to endure abuse at the hands of someone they loved and trusted and it's a sad, horrible thing! This was written with a lot of emotion and depth! Thank you for sharing!


  • myXheartXsings
    December 6, 2005
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    This was so sad, the story behind it. But its one of those that has a good ending, even if its sad to everyones else, the little girl still got what she needed in the end. i loved it. really great though extremely sad.

  • OurxBeginning
    December 5, 2005
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    Woe, this is flowing with emotion..and I can relate to this. Very powerful, and sad. great job, and keep it up.

    ♥Broken

  • Charming Angel
    December 5, 2005
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    So sad when parents don't care. Amazing Piece.


  • prettyktm
    December 5, 2005
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    Just one advice, keep your boredom on, so that I've get to read
    more brillent poems like this from you.

  • freespiritsrwe
    December 5, 2005
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    Wonderful

    This is very beautiful, well written.
    It holds the truth of what so many victims of alcohol and drug abusers live with.
    Lovely write

  • Melanchiah
    November 27, 2005
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    Amazing write! I really loved it as well. This was extremely touching. I know what it is like to be abused, and to feel lost. Good luck, please keep writing!

  • Stevie
    November 26, 2005
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    Exellent write!!!I loved it...The flow and rhyming were great and the words so touching...Good luck and keep up the great work!


  • Midget Of Fury
    November 26, 2005
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    I loved it. It reminded of the song The Little Girl (John Michael Montgomery). Beautifully written, powerful message, sad sad story. Great write
    Best Of Wishes
    Tiffany


  • GldnShadows
    November 3, 2005
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    Wow...just wow. this had to come from somewhere and not just from being bored. I mean the emotion put into this is just...just wow. I really like it. its awesome. very sad but full of emotion. thanks for sharing ~shadow~

  • annapoems
    November 3, 2005
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    beautiful
    i like the rythm of the poem
    and it also touches the soul within
    who is this about anyways?
    nice poem write me back i want 2 know who it is about

    Anne


  • starzbabe621
    November 3, 2005
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    Wow, this was amazing...I really felt horribly for this girl, and you put her feelings into such a package. I think you are extremely talented!! I'm really glad I read it. Amazing job!

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