You Could Be Mine.
Yet it seems as though we have just met
Only it’s feels like a lifetime I can’t forget
Unable to have you in my life so it seems.
Content I’ll be to see you in my dreams,
Opened my heart to your irresistible charms
Unable to resist the feel of being in your arms,
Love entered our lives on that day
Desire filled our hearts in a special way.
Bringing joy into our lives for just a moment
Each touch of your lips makes me content.
Memories we shared that I can never let go
I know you would come to me if I said so,
Now I know that you could be mine forever
Elusive though is our dreams of being together.
Author notes
Song title You could be mine
Someone I met whilst on holidays only he's not free.
Written November 3rd, 2005
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A contest entry
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300 points, ended November 6, 2005, 8 entries
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HI jennifer, true, one should not expect the person too to love whence you are in love with him or her. going thru each line of the poem i felt as in i am reading a good lyrical romantic song. Really nice one you scribbled. .. ANU
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This is so romantic and the picture is so sweet and rosy and the background no different.
The acrostic is so well done with the feelings that you encompass for your knight in the shining armour..and after reading this he will sweep you off your feet..Shubs
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wow how lovely! beautiful picture as well. This is wonderful for an acrostic, their not too easy sometimes. Thanks for entering,
-Faithful Dreamer -
AHHHHHH, I see now Vic, you were replying to Jans reply
have I confused you 
good 
Jenni
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Hey Vic, was your comment meant for me, or Jan? you have me confused now, and you know that's not hard to do!
s Jenni
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My dear little Chickadee, you do make me smile
I've told you before they're about you...We just have to keep it a secret, shhhhhh I love your comments you leave, they brighten my day. You should Pop in and check Lady Joans out sometimes, she's learning to do Sonnets and also to rhyme.
Luvsya your pluff fluff spongy doll
Jenni
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This good one has not been taked mums
... tee hee.. missing you lots... love u always
- vic to mums (janice m picket) -
5 Stars *****
with such a beautiful poem for me.. how come me just be inur dreams my doll ??????.. i loved it... soo veryyy much.. great wow wonderful awesome sweet lovely rhymes and poems.. rhymes takes the charm .. i loved it.. your poems are awesome when you rhyme them... i really adore this poem..
keep on rhyming 
. enjoy writing
nice write.. good work.. thanks for sharing my dear friend ..............
*hugs and kisses*
*gives choco*
take cares and have anice time my dear friend ................................ just keep it up ..................................... your humble little friend ....................................
................................ ............................ .................... - vic ( who else????? )
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None here in Sydney either Jan, had to go all the way to Melbourne to meet my soul mate, but unfortunately he's taken
ohhh well, one never knows what's in the future. have to 
and bare it. You mean to say you haven't any gorgeous Bronzed hunks up in Sunny Queensland? WOW, that's awful.
Jenn
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Great Poem Well Done
Oh How romantic yet sad. Why are the good ones always taken. Was this in Australia??? Because there are not too many good ones here! LOL. Lots of Bad bad boys though LOL
Hugs
Jan
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