Don't fret, Precious, I'm here
Stay with me, go back to sleep
Pay no mind to the rabble, listen to me
I will protect you, there's no need for fear
Lay your head down, child, don't shed a tear
Keep your cries low; fangs are only teeth
Don't fret, Precious, I'm here
Stay with me, go back to sleep
The pain will subside as the whip draws near
It's much more painful for you to be free
I'm protecting your fragile soul, don't you see?
You are not my puppet, I'm not a puppeteer
Don't fret, Precious, I'm here...
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Ahaha...yes...yet...another...one of these...rondel...things. ABba abAB abbaA rhyme.
I hope this one is better than the last. e_e;
Inspired by Pet by A Perfect Circle.
Written November 3rd, 2005
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Lmfao *moans* I just love you hip thrusts!
Yeeeeeah...The Zon thing KINDA started...then...it stopped. x_x; Dunno why. *shrug* Ah well. How is it another Zon thing? I don't see it. Lmao. -
OH EM GHEE! BDSM ANDANDNANDANDNANDNADN.. Rondels.. *Moan; hip thrust.*
Okay.. o o; I can see how this was gonna' be another Zon thing, and it kinda' was.. Only.. Not? 'CAUSE.. I dunno'. o o; It is now that I look back at it.. AGAIN.. But yeah. e e; Lmao.. I'm tired and stuff. ._. -
I dunno...I'm not very proud of either of them, really. This one was supposed to have to do with Zon...but it didn't work out that way. o o;
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This is also another great write Rose. In your comment it sounds like you weren't really proud of the one before when YOU SHOULD BE!!!
Yay! More fantasy writes that I love.
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Thank you for your kind words.
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Very good
Very good, leaves the reader with so many possible scenarios for the imagination to create, upon what you wrote, great structure and form.......
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