My heart has been cut in half
Wandering in the darkness
Wondering why you lied
Wondering….
Why would you do this to me?
Sorrow and anger fills my heart
I trusted you
I loved you
I shared with you my darkest secrets
Open as a book with you
Telling you of my emotions
Where did I go wrong?
I began to discover myself
Getting out of my comfort zone
Now the book is closed
Heart is hardened
Wanting to give up on life
Wanting it to be over
Hating the pain
Hating everyone
Now I’ll never know who you truly are
I’ll never be able to meet you
I don’t care
I’m glad it’s over
Moving on with my life
Getting over your lies
Reading to start over
With new confidence.
Author notes
Dedicated to the girl who I wish I never met - Kelsy... if that's even her real name. Some of the emotions like wanting to give up aren't real, but I stuck them in there. I'm over Kelsy and this whole problem and I'm moving on with my life. Thanks for reading, though.
Written November 3rd, 2005
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heartfelt piece, nice flow structured well and has the words to understand what your explaining in this write.. good job and thank you for sharing..Linda
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well I can tell that this must have been a hard situation for you to go through(your poem makes that obvious)Poems written on a personal experience always add that something extra that the reader can feel. I think a lot of people have been through this same thing, just on different levels. Never give up, never back down, and never stop writing! Amazing piece,
-Faithful Dreamer -
Hey there... long time no see. lol Thanks for reading my poem and such. I really appreciate it. So how has life been? Alright, I hope. Talk to you later.
--Tim -
Wkd poem. I hope you feel a lot better now!! (BIG HUG!!)
I m sorry I havent commented on your poems for so long... I havent been on AP for ages. Great poem once again!!
~Alena~ -
Oh man Tim. I am so sorry about this! For a girl to lie so much; I know it hurts badly. I am very sorry that this happened to you! I am so glad to have met you, Tim. You are a great guy, and for a girl to lie to you, well she doesnt know what shes loosing! Keep up your fire for Christ!
Grace -
ooooo my gosh!!! im sosososososososo sorry if i can help ya please im me i hope ur ok God's watching over u and loves u
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This is a deeply emotional piece! Lies are the worst. I don't understand what people have to gain by making toys of others. Why not just be honest and walk away if you're not in it for the long haul? I know how you feel. You've done a good job of expressing all the pain and bitterness and humiliation that goes along with being deceived. Nice write! I really enjoyed it!
Sheryl -
You're never alone
Awwwww!! I'm soo sorry about this happening. I had this happen to me about a month ago so I also know how you feel. Your poem is sooo amazing! It gave me a mental image in my mind of what it's like over and over again. I'm glad that you're able to move on and yes, NEVER give up hope on love!! You also have all your friends to talk to incase you need advice or just some comfort. If you want to talk to me about anything, I'm willing to listen and I am one who never tells secrets unless it's for the better. I hope yiou'll be ok.(Hugs) Talk to you later!
~Ciara~ -
Hi Tim, I am sorry for your hurt and your loss right now. I don't know the story nor does it matter but you keep your faith and your eyes on God. Being hurt by ones we care about is never good but He will help you over come. God bless you always, ~Angel~
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Hey Mom, thanks so much for your comment. I really appreciate you and all that you do for this site. You are such an encouragement to so many people, including me. Thanks for your prayers and for being there to listen. God bless you.
--Tim -
Hey Shannon, thanks for stopping by and reading my poem. I appreciate it.
--Tim -
Aleicia, thanks so much for your comment. I haven't talked to you in a while. What's been going on? I hope everything is going well. Thanks again for reading my poem.
--Tim -
i'm so sorry, tim... i know how you feel, if not exactly... i've been hurt and lied to and you really convey the emotions very well. This is truly an amazing write, if you can get past the pain in it. big s
-aleicia -
great write. very deep. you will find the right person..one that WONT be decietful and yea...
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WONDERFUL POEM
I am so proud of you Tim. You have your faith in God. He has gotten you through this crazy mess and He will continue. Don't give up on love, it will be beautiful when God brings the right person into your life. God Bless you Tim. Always know you are in my prayers and that I am here if you need to talk. I am a proud AP Mom to have you as an AP son. Love ya, Sandy (Mom)
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that was deep. i liked it alot. i could really feel the emotion. keep up the good work.
-rag doll -
excellent
This is a great poem.It's sad,but it's wonderful that you are picking up yourself and moving on...
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