Your atrocious stories forever laid in the past
as you stand reborn before us all
The way you hold yourself; standing tall
Not hard to see that, in the end, you laughed last
The path ahead of you now seems quite vast
Maybe this time you'll triumph and not fall
Your atrocious stories forever laid in the past
as you stand reborn before us all
The demons you once held, away they are cast
The fear and torment you once felt, you cannot recall
You've forgotten all your heartache, your every pleading call
But don't look now, you are falling fast
Your atrocious stories forever laid in the past...
Author notes
Ahahahaha...Um...yes...
So this is my first attempt at a rondel. ABba abAB abbA rhyme.
Please excuse it's complete and utter shittiness...I promise I will get better with practice. x_x;
It was inspired by The Noose by A Perfect Circle.
Written November 3rd, 2005
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The Noose was, like, so cool...so I wrotr about it! That song reminds me of Kira. x_x;
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I like this!
'Cause.. YES! APC Inspireddddd. *Dance, dance.* [ On a side note, I'm terribly HYPER considering that I'm also sick.. I am the Walking Paradox! xD ] And I don't think it's shitty or any of that other nonesense. Mine was just as bad, if not worse.. I mean.. C'MON! I rhymed "near" with "here" .. That's so horrid.
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Gosh, girl, it wasn't THAT good.
It is a little complicated, but gets easier as you get used to it. I jsut looked off Toria's rondel and went from there. It's called Don't Fret. It's pretty and hers are better than my first two.
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Wow! This is so great! It seems so complicated and it's hard to believe that this is your first!! WOW WOW WOW!!!
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Aha...glad you like it.
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great
this is a really good write keep it up
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