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Hope

I just have a hope,
that people stop using dope,
and start give a damn in the pope,
instead of hanging themselves in a rope,
if they manage to cope,
i think instead of being in a slope,
humans can start to hope.

sayonara babey

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Written November 3rd, 2005

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  • Time focus on Me
    November 23, 2005
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    amen to that one right there u said it right right u go with your bad self wonderful wonderful keep up the wonderful talent u got going on wonderful bravo keep on writing u got it going on


  • Starhiker
    November 3, 2005
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    Funny! Laughed out loud when I read this! I couldn't agree more with you, though... Wonderful poem, great set of rhymes. Hope your mouse starts working again. (What's the sayonara babey at the end for?)

  • smilingshadow
    November 3, 2005
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    neat

    nice.. i dunno but it sounded like a mini rap come poem to me.. nice and simple message ... good work keep it up.. best wishes smiling shadow
    Edited on Nov 03, 12:44 because ''.