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He Cried Again Today

 

 

 

He cried again today
thinking of the pain of a friend.
A simple story told
deeply revealing her heart within
tragically broken
long ago.

 

It was one moment
one scene
that told me everything
about her soul
and explained why her sadness
is never that far away.

 


 

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to 'her' with love
Written November 3rd, 2005

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  • misticmoonlite gold member
    November 4, 2005
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    Friendship/love embraces anyone in pain,we can not feel the depth of the situation,but we can support as I feel in this poem you did..so very well,God Bless you for being you! as you can be foot loose and fancy free in AP ..be well and don't change any thing about you Wayne,you're awesome! Linda


  • Night Hope gold member
    November 4, 2005
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    We are so much more than the Pain we've known, Wayne...yes, Hearts get broken...they also heal & learn to love again...may your Friend find healing...& may you smile soon... Wanda


  • imonlyme7
    November 3, 2005
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    I'm ready for a smile..wishing happiness your way.


  • Scarlet Ambrosia
    November 3, 2005
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    awwww dad
    this is so sad
    hope you find happiness soon
    loveyah daddy!
    your dark angelic Ap daughter
    Di


  • FallingSideways silver member
    November 3, 2005
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    AWWWW...
    sighs
    Hopefully you will find more reasons to smile than to be sad.
    A truly compassionate piece


  • Anna Emkah
    November 3, 2005
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    This is beautiful Wayne. I am sure, the person for whom you wrote this will be very pleased to see such a compasionate young man telling this in a poem. You did a great job. Anna.


  • whispersoftly
    November 3, 2005
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    Mr Wbiro this is soo sad its soo beautifully written and amazing as usual well done and to whoever 'her' is i wish her peace love and light and can only hope and prey that it gets better for her one day. xx Mssoftly


  • wbiro gold member
    November 3, 2005
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    Yes, I thought about the 'tears of joy' between us immediately! Well, I'll have to wait until they well up again! lol


  • Lyrical Soul silver member
    November 3, 2005
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    Whoever "her" is...I send my love as well and only because I know that this isn't for me, I would've thought it was otherwise. Your heart is bigger than a house big brother. Love you!

    ~Your sis

  • Molly Densmore silver member
    November 3, 2005
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    This is written so beautifully and so sad. I love this and your words feel the emotion and transends to the reader. Great write, like always, you have a great talent. Thanks for sharing.


  • Celticmoon
    November 3, 2005
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    A sweet way to tell and show a friend you see and feel their pain. May she, whomever she maybe, be blessed with all the goodness and kindness life has to offer. May any all pains disapate quickly though some seem to last a lifetime Your words touch the heart my dear, bless you for caring so much.




    Blessings
    Bel

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