The wind whistles through the tree.
A lonely soliloquy.
Speckled skies of fall time warmth.
A rich golden sea...
A golden palate - an artists dream
Kids frolicking in the fall time existence.
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Written November 3rd, 2005
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Good Fall Poem!
Congratulations on being Poet of the month. You deserve it. You've been a Poet at Allpoetry a long time. I like this poem. It's short, but gives the feeling of the season.
Andy
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oops! Forgot the little clappies
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lmao you didn't have to give me clappies!! but thank you!!! I'm so giddy about being poet of the month!!!! **jumps around**
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Jumps around like this?
Shake your booty! 
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So lovely that we can come visit a poem that you wrote so long ago, for the poem does not die with the falling of the leaves.
Ha!
Beautiful, Rosita Bonita! Congratulations on being Poet of the Month!
Love,
Momma Bella
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awesome
The Imagery in this write is BEAUTIFUL!!!! -
this was really good. keep it up.
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I liked this, It let me drift and think of many things at once...
props to you,
Whooo!
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I love how you made it short and sweet. It was a great poem. The metaphores were used well and overall, it was fantastic..I loved it.
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To view the season as a sea of golden hues is such a lovely way to look at this sea with quiet anticipation. This is gorgeous and worth a hundred applauses!!!~vickie j
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Very effective in convaying the feelings of autumn. Well written. Vivid, nice styel. flows seamlessly. All in all something I would read again.
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awesome
that was a good poem you did good keep up the good work you should check one of my poems under bleeze my favorites are temptation or deeply in love
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