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Procrastinating . . .

Argh! i do nOt feel like studying!
it rained the other day and
it was cold and the sky was gray and
i was happy and then
quite melancholy
cause i missed the sun, but the water was fun i was wearing a white shirt but decided to change!
loveliness in an XXL sweater, joy to feeling cozy on a grody day! wrapped up in a blanket i watched the Rocky Horror Picture Show and shivered with antici. . .

pation! to see what would happen later in my life when i failed to get my math homework done! but i started at one and got through to 29 but then i almost didn't
turn it in on time, and the teacher wasn't mine, the sub, she didn't mind, the smiles unwind cause i'm feelin real fine being happy's not a crime, less you soak it in some brine and turn into a pickle sell yourself for a nickle and poke things with a stickle and break the bric-a-brac on your grandmother's back

shelf,
where people hide their most important feelings. . .do you have a back shelf? are you disguising yourself
as somebody else?
my emotions melt and i haven't felt
this odd in decades, i want purple kool-aid
cause now i'm a mermaid insanely out-played in the
stupidity arcade. . .

you wanna dance?

Author notes

um this is stream of concience, so it prolly doesn't make sense lol tell me what you honestly think i hate it when people say o that's really nice and move on. . .or when they don't say anything at all lol so blah!
Written November 3rd, 2005

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  • terrytheterrifyc
    November 8, 2005
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    Excellent!

    Awesome.... yes this does make perfect sense. I really enjoyed this and I understand where you are coming from. Keep up the excellent writing.


  • bluedot56
    November 4, 2005
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    yay!

    hehe yeah, i prolly should've said something at the beginning lol i always forget that people can't read my mind! thanx for the comment! haha my thoughts very rarely have any kind of destination =)


  • TJCasser
    November 4, 2005
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    Thank goodness for the note - I was sitting here wondering if there was just something wrong with me for not understanding... the flow was obvious, the rush of a bubbling brook of thought, but the destination seemed unknown..


  • bluedot56
    November 3, 2005
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    hooray!

    thanx. . .it was fun to write lol


  • Nola-999
    November 3, 2005
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    AWSOME!

    weirdly K00l!

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