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Dying Each Day


Hiding in the shadows
Locked away from the world
Crying a river of tears
Swimming in a pool
Of loneliness and heart break
Shutting out the pain
Turning to stone
A broken soul
Gives birth
To a loveless heart
Sheltered from the storm
Numb to the hurt
No hope in sight
Battered and bruised
Ashamed and abused
Little by little
Dying each day




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Written November 2nd, 2005

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  • Celticmoon
    November 3, 2005
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    You, my dear man, are just to kind.
    You have the biggest heart I have ever seen.
    Slowly you are renewing my faith in humanity simply by knowing there are people out there that are as loving and caring as you.
    Bless your heart and soul always....


  • poeticweaver gold member
    November 2, 2005
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    Sad, Well Done Hun!!!

    Wow! I see you have had a bad day, to say the least, this just makes me want to cry I hope things get better soon, I know what it feels to die a little each day, as a matter of fact, many do, now knowing this never made me feel better, for I don't like seeing anyone suffer, and the fact that I'm not alone in my battles, well, makes me feel no better really. You have me thinking, and now I remember why I go on. It's sweet, sensitive, souls like you. I can relate too. Much love hun, hang in there, your friend.

    -Timothy The Poetic Weaver