I Hope You Drown
I Hope You Hang
No Wait I Just Hope Your Forever In Pain
You Deserve Nothing But Blame
Author notes
Short and To the Point if You dont like it cuz Its Bad thats cool But If You Don't Like it Cuz It's Short Screw You !!!!!
Im in a Bad Mood In Case You Can't Tell.
Written November 2nd, 2005
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oops that word is suppose to be sox not six lol. ok well bye now!
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Hey I like short, to-the-point poems. U don't see many of those anymore. But yes this is a nice very simple poem. It rocked my six off lol. itz kewl. well keep up the good work chicka! bye byez ~Jamie~
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i liked it
wooooow stasier lol i luved it it was very angry lol great job i liked it alot i hope things will be okay i love you lots AND YOU BETTER KNOW IT lol ~lissa~p.s it was awesome -
Wow I like it :-p Keep it up. It doesnt have to be long for it to be to the point!
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hehehe asia, i know exactly how you feel!!!
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Thax you ~!!!
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Thax you that means alot i think it is the best comment i ever got !!
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wonderful
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wow that was really effective i enjoyed it alot...
<3 ash
Edited on Nov 02, 5:02 p.m. because ''. -
I love short poems and this was wonderful! It has raw, powerful emotion packed in and dripping from every word. greatly done! bravo ^_^
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