The Way You Comb Your Hair
It Drives Me Nuts
The way you always are unshaven and untitey
The way you smile
So devilish
So evil it makes me scream
I hate everything about you
That stupid little voice you have
The way you say ramdom things
The way you make me smile
The beautiful way you have of making me cry
The way you sing Hank Willams Jr.
I hate it,
I hate that
I hate you
But,
Can someone please tell me why i love you?
I love to hate you
I hate to love you.
I hate love
I love you
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Written November 2nd, 2005
A contest entry
- Inspired by 10 Things I Hate About You by StarvingAuthor.
300 points, ended December 9, 2005, 29 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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lol so true so true XD good job!
~BCL -
very well written
This is very interesting. I like the way you tell us all about the things that you hate about him, and then turn around and ask the question "Can someone please tell me why I love you?" They say that if you hate someone, you still have love type feelings for them because the opposite of love is indifference.
etherealforu
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It's raw, visceral and has a really good feel to it. Keep ot up and good luck in the contest.
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awe! Jessica! This is sooooo awesome. Keep up the good work. xoxo- shaina
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aww jessica this is good! i love you AND GREG and good luck with logan! hes the best i love logan!
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