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Back In Time

My memory fades back
to a happier place
Indulging in times
of yesterday
When flowers bloomed
from raindrop kisses
And the sea foam tides
caressed the golden shores
Transcending into the euphoria
of my very first kiss
So sweet,
So gentle,
So very tender...
Locked together in a
seemingly everlasting embrace
Passion slowly rising
As my delicate silken lips
pressed upon his
Unleashing a overwhelming fire
of lasciviousness in my soul
My heart raced irresistibly
as his hands drew me closer
Thoughts of forever
Danced about in my mind
Oh, how I wish
I could go back in time



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Written November 2nd, 2005

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  • Snappy - Doodles
    June 23, 2006
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    Beautiful picture. Yes, back in time to that first kiss to that fist love. What memories!!!

    Snappy


  • Iohagh
    March 30, 2006
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    Up until the end
    your passions I defend
    and then you regret
    making dry memories wet.

    Smoosh Janet


  • Jacob Jesus Escape
    November 13, 2005
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    even this cold old 49 year old critter
    got a thrill out of these words
    i m going to go out and look for another first kiss!~)
    ...and i was happy to find this one here


  • poeticweaver gold member
    November 3, 2005
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    -hugs-

    How I long for yesterday, yes, I love the first time I held hand with another love, the first kiss, the flutter in each heartbeat, the emotions that overflow of joy and happiness...I hope and wish you many more of those loving days ahead. Thanks for sharing you, and I must say, you express yourself beautifully in your saddness. Love ya my friend!

    -Timothy The Poetic Weaver


  • Celticmoon
    November 2, 2005
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    No unfortunately the person in reference I have not even spoken to nor seen in almost fifteen years now. I do miss him greatly. He was of my best friends at the time


  • Andy Stephenson
    November 2, 2005
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    A nice poem. Did the person it references see it? We can't go back in time, but sometimes memories can come pleasantly with us into the future.


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    November 2, 2005
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    this with the picture, is sensual,you down played it ,but I think it has the sexappeal there.. good write..Linda

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