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Just for Yoouu.

The trouble is -

Your voice is intoxicating
    . As drunk as I sound. It's true.
I could deny that I love you,
 [But what good would that do? You'd know I was lying.]

When I think I know you; You just blow me away.
  | *You amaze me*
And I realise I'm not the "Girl of your dreams"
And you surely aren't the guy of mine.
In fact we are the "Opposites attract" type
The odd couple;
|OR| The two people everybody wants to be.


The ugly duckling got the Prince.
In your words "The Princess found the Pauper"
|| I got Yoouu ||
"You ain't beautiful, But you'll do."


But I'm a sucker for Yoouu. What can I say?

"Everything in this world is nothing compared to Yoouu?"
"Every second with Yoouu -IS- heaven?"
"No matter how painful love can be, not having Yoouu in my life would be !MUCH! worse?"
"Without Yoouu there is no Mee?"

Well
- I certainly am no fool
But blind love isn't for me. (I realise that now)


-*Oh, I love Yoouu-*

Yoouu've got Mee -
And that's that.



   . "Every second with you is heaven, And in your arms I'd gladly die"

Author notes

This is for Steve.

So I don't expect people to bother reading it, and for that matter it isn't supposed to be 'poetic', 'well-versed' or 'easily understood'. It's Mee & my heart.

IflulfS.

Written November 2nd, 2005

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  • Cheeky paper
    October 25, 2007

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    Oh sweetheart Kals,

    I like this verse a lot. Its cute and it is so Yoouu!! and believe me You and Steve are a perfect couple together. No matter how people would say about you and your guy, believe in yourself.. you guys are happy together is all matter and that is all about love.

    Write me back when u can, I miss ya so bad! many things I want to talk to you and one of a good news is I am going to the Germany! and spend my xmas with my bf and his family! Isnt that a good news? Write me hun.

    Much love,
    Paper


  • XxDemonicAngelxX
    November 17, 2005
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    this is very cute i havent read anything much like this good work


  • November 3, 2005
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    very unique and clever, i enjoyed reading this, sounds like love LOL!


  • xtootiex
    November 3, 2005
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    ooo cool. i like all the...pretty things on it lol nice poem x x x

  • kay1719
    November 2, 2005
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    gorgeous

    well i think it is as you are..
    GORGEOUS>>
    its just straight from the heart, no trying to rhyme or thinking of what to say next. just putting it all out there. i love it, really. its beautiful darling!

    <<< "Every second with you is heaven, And in your arms I'd gladly die"-- thats my favorite. ahh im just in love with it, its so, right and beautiful. great job.. once again.

    <33
    YOUR MISS INXS.


  • Cheeky paper
    November 2, 2005
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    Hi sweety!
    Sounds like a lyric
    YOu did really well job,
    I was enjoyed reading lots,
    your boyfriend is a lucky boy who have your heart!
    On the piece , you show the reader how much you love him (yoou love him SO! MUCH! )
    It was beautiful done ,
    Keep on writing!

    -paper-


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    November 2, 2005
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    well i think you and your heart did well and it read just fine, i enjoyed it, lovely lyrics and all! Keep writing from the heart, that's how it should be, then at leat what you are writing is real emotion and not forced. great job!
    Natasha

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