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Knockin' On Heaven's Door

I'm Knockin' On Heaven's Door again
Screaming, "Won't you please let me in?"

No matter how hard I yell,
I feel as if I'm standing in hell
"God I need to talk to you,
cause I just don't know what to do".
I'm trying so hard to fight
But I only seem to loose my sight
Everytime I get a foothold
Someone shakes that fragile hold
Well meaning people push me
I just don't know who they want me to be

I'm Knockin' On Heaven's Door again
Screaming, "Won't you please let me in?"

I feel like Dust in the Wind
With each blow back and forth I bend
Its the ones I love, I turn from
Because I don't know what I've become
What have I turned into
What is it You want me to do?
All I want to do is tell my mom "Don't Cry, I'm alright".
But I just want someone to hold me tight an say, "It's alright".
Have I really made you as one Enstranged
Or have I just put myself in this cage

I'm Knockin' On Heaven's Door again
Screaming, "Won't you please let me in?"

"O My God where do I walk from here?"
In my pain I never shed a tear
"It's So Easy to Despair"
Even when so many people care

I'm Knockin' On Heaven's Door again
Screaming, "Won't you please let me in?"

"Sweet Child O' Mine, let me lift your pain
You need to stop driving in the fast lane.
You have taken on Too Much Too Soon child,
don't let these worries pile.
Bring It Back Home to me,
don't hold those worries for the devil to see.
Don't envy the Yesterdays,
but look for the todays.
Hold on to my hand
and I will lead you to My land".


I'm Knockin' On Heaven's Door again
Saying, "Now I see I'm only in the Shadow of Your Love, I must learn to step in

Author notes

I used alot of titles because they fit in so well.

Written November 1st, 2005

A contest entry

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  • zillion
    November 6, 2005
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    I love how you used alot of the titles. thats really cool, extra effort!lol very nice poem and great flow. thanks so much for entering,

    -Faithful Dreamer


  • jenelda silver member
    November 3, 2005
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    OOHH My, I feel I can really sing to the tune of this, and it's wonderful how you've worked in extra song lines to fit in with your poem. Well done and good luck.
    Hugs Jenn
    Edited on Nov 03, 8:11 p.m. because ''.


  • Sarah957
    November 2, 2005
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    Great chorus line!
    I'm knocking on heavens door again, screaming "Won't you let me in"
    It really says it all, doesn't it?