Before I met you there was something missing.
I felt incomplete.
It was like I was missing a piece of my self.
With you I am complete for the first time in my life.
I can't remember what life is like without you.
You make me feel like a princess.
I love you.
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I am head over heels in love with my boyfriend of eight months.
Written November 1st, 2005
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Good read...I felt that way when I met and married my husband.
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wow this is a short but interesting piece, it doesn't need to be a long poem to get the meaning across...love often makes us feel as if we are complete.
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Thanks. I wanted it to be longer actually but I ran out of ideas. I might expand it at a later date.
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Beautifully written, so much emotion in so few words, I love it, It flows very well and has a nice rhythm to it.
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Short and sweet. How great it feels. When your life finally matters, when before the other it didn't feel the same...it's a great feeling.
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small beautiful piece
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