In the darkness
We shall play
All night long
Til break of day
Let's roll around
hot and sweaty
Come on baby,
Are you ready?
I'm your fantasy
I'm your dream
I'll fill your needs
And make you scream
Now real slow
Slide on in
You feel so good
This must be sin
Nice and slow
Not too fast
That's it, baby
Make it last
Take me higher
than ever before
Make me explode
And scream for more
Leave me breathless
and gasping for air
After we've had
all we can bare
Author notes
Thank you my dear Wbiro for the suggestion 
Written November 1st, 2005
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Sizzlin!
More more more! I want some Mo!lol
) Hot and Sizzlin!
Visions of sexual interludes burst in my head like
the 4th of July celebration. Colors of red white and blue
sparkled with erotic jubalation! Very Hot!
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More a piece of fantasy that I hope to have happen. Would be nice to finally meet the man that could make me feel like this.
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This seems like a hot and happy poem. Is it a reflection of a real happy time, or was it a fantasy? It is good to see you writing. It's a little steamy now.
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Celtic you pulled it off.. they said it all go for it lol..
working on one not sure if I want it on my site but shall see lol
Linda -
OH Mally,
you are just so cute and sweet.
So you wanna be the lucky guy?
Hmmmmmm.......well maybe you are
I'll never tell
As for being a sinner....
If this is a sin,
then by all means, I'm the biggest one there is
Love ya Mally baby
Blessings
celticmoon
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woah.....what a steamy hot writing......and at a time in the morning reading this is ummmmm oh well ill not mention that one.....this is beautifully hot.....flowed like the juices ill bet......guess we all know whats on your mind now done we celts.....whos the lucky guy?......lol can I be....
You sinner.....better repent now...
Love the wonderful thoughts of making love here.....beautiful
Huggs baby
Malabu -
Hot and sweaty is best and mixes well with love, passion and desire. Nice blending over all
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Well, I like the title and picture already! lol OK, reading... woah! this one gets adult in a hurry! woo! now what is it with hot and sweaty! lol That seems to be a popular desire...
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LOL......Thank you Lovin. You are too kind my dear. Glad you enjoyed it
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Excellent Steamy Write
Hot, Sexy, Steamy, Wistfull, Erotic,Classy, if an erotic poem makes me stand at attention( take that ANY way you want too) lololol then it certainly deserves my applause..Nice Piece Celtic..Umm! I mean that in a purely literally source of course, but you do possess Hot beuaty as well. -
Thank you Susan. As always your comments are most appreciated. I am glad you liked this piece. Iwas trying to keep it more on the side of non vulgar. I think I managed that but then again some may still say it's too much.
Blessings
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steamy~
Oh
Steamy hot passionate and sensual
I love this.....
I think I need to turn on my air conditoner now rather than the heat.....
Fans self and swoons
This is awesome love it
Hugs n love
Susan~~~
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