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Jacque Strap

Jacque Strap
you piece of crap
you make me itch
you make me scratch

You rub me wrong
the whole day long
i sing my song
(high voice) and act real strong

you irritate
and tears i hate
come down at fast rates
and now i can't mate

you need to go
you've made a show
i ran real slow
my laps of woe

when nature calls
i go to stalls
i wish you'd fall
and let go of my -----skin

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Written November 1st, 2005

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  • rufina caraid gold member
    November 2, 2005
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    Sounds like you needs a little talcum powder to relieve that itch. LOL
    Thanks for your entry and Good Luck.
    Vonnie
    Edited on Nov 02, 6:46 because ''.


  • DarkenedAuras
    November 1, 2005
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    LOL this was great but the rhyming wandered at the end LOL but that is okay I get it (Jock Strap) Let go of my skin lol.....if you wanted it to rhyme though maybe you could use the words {men} {Then} {Dim} and then {Skin} just a suggestion.....otherwise this is great especially if this isn't your forte'


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    November 1, 2005
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    lol.. good poem and rhymes to boot good one indeed
    keep writing, i like the humor in these writes ..Linda