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Joyce (Rhyming Acrostic){Gold}

Joyce


Joyous by nature I try to be

Open and honest for all to see

Young at heart I've decided to stay

Choosing carefully the words I say

Everlasting love it is the way



Joyce Le Lievre
(sunny day)

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Written November 1st, 2005

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  • sunny day
    March 19, 2006
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    herrbench, Thank you very much for the lovely words, I do try to remain humble as I know I am not the greatest of writers.
    I do love the acrostics myself, they intrigued me from the start. Love and blessings for you, today and always. Joyce

  • herrbench
    March 19, 2006
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    Nice. Very nice. Always been a fan of the Acrostic. And you've written a poem about yourself that manages to be positive without being arrogant. Good job.

  • sunny day
    January 10, 2006
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    Pinky Bug, Thank you so much for the comment and the honorable mention. I just noticed your contest at the last minute and I thought it would be good to enter it. Thank you so much for hosting as well. Acrostics are cool. Love and blessings for you, today and always.
    Joyce


  • Loverdoo
    January 10, 2006
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    CUTE!!!!! lol i LOVE this!!! this is awsome and very cool, i love accrostics with names, makes me happy lol great write

  • sunny day
    November 3, 2005
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    Rachel, Thank you so much for hosting this wonderful contest and also for the shiny new silver trophy that is now sitting on my home page. I'm so happy you liked this enough to feel it warranted one of the prizes. Love and blessings for the sunniest of days, today and always. Joyce

  • sunny day
    November 3, 2005
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    Don, Thank you so much for the applause and the oh so lovely comment. What a wonderful compliment. I did end up winning the silver for this, but just entering this contest was so much fun. Thank you again. Love and blessings for the sunniest of days, today and always. Joyce


  • Dragon Tamer
    November 3, 2005
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    Very, very cool acrostic.It even has some awesome advice at the end.I loved the flow and rhythm this had.You are truly talented and it shows in this piece.I wish you all the best in this contest.


  • rachkitty
    November 2, 2005
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    This is awesome

  • sunny day
    November 2, 2005
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    Anna, Thank you so much for the applause and the wonderful comment. Special qualities make for special people. You certainly must be one. Love and blessings to you for the sunniest of days, today and always. Joyce


  • Anna Emkah
    November 2, 2005
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    My name is not Joyce, but this could have been said about me. I fully agree with the text. Well done. Great acrostic in rhyme. Anna.

  • sunny day
    November 2, 2005
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    Hi Rachel, First I want to say thank you for the applause and then tell you how much it means seeing your wonderful words to me in that comment. I am overwhelmed by all the responses I have gotten for this and you just added to that. You are just as awesome and I don't see how we couldn't become friends. Again, thank you so much for your kindness and also for hosting this marvelous contest. Love and blessings to you my new friend for the sunniest of days, today and always. Joyce

  • sunny day
    November 2, 2005
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    Kitty, Thank you so much for the applause and such a wonderful comment. You're just saying that to butter mom up, what are you looking for a raise in allowance. LOL Just kidding and you know that. I'm humbled by your words Kitty.
    You just made me trying to get the red out now. You are just as beautiful and I am not exaggerating when I say that. I do know what my daughter looks like and her inner beauty is just as great. Lots of love, Mom

  • rachkitty
    November 2, 2005
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    Sweet

    hi Joyce, really sweet poem about yourself. I think you are awesome, and I hope that we can become friends! Rachel


  • Bride Of Hate
    November 2, 2005
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    Wow! This is so beautiful! Sums you up brilliantly A beautiful poem for a beautiful person by a beautiful person Lovely in every way!
    One love,
    Kitty xxxxxxxx

  • sunny day
    November 2, 2005
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    Maria, Thank you for the applause and the wonderful comment.
    You always fill me with so much praise, it is very inspiring.
    I am humbled by what you and a few others have said in regards to me. In fact it makes me I don't wear makeup so that will make my cheeks red enough. LOL Thank you my sweet niece and I am going to check out your poem now. I thank you for the best wishes too. Love and blessings to you, today and always. Joyce
    Edited on Nov 07, 2:18 p.m. because ''.


  • Ray Von
    November 2, 2005
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    Lovely

    Hmmm........ I love it!!! I have just entered the contest and love the contest too. Well it does describe you well doesn't it.
    "Choosing carefully the words I say", and so true this line is ma friend, aunt actually Good luck in the contest though with this fab thing I don't think that you will need it.
    Maria

  • sunny day
    November 2, 2005
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    Navdeep, You don't need to apologize. I know you have been busy and the fact that you moved and had no net for a while.
    Thank you so much for the applause and the lovely compliment you paid me in your comment. I'm so sorry to hear that you were sick. Glad you are better now though. Funny you mentioned Joy, that was almost my name when my parents brought me home from the hospital. LOL I must have gotten to crying or something and they decided I wasn't such a joy after all. Thank you again so much. You are the bestest.
    We only had 8 children show up at the door for Halloween, guess we will be eating a lot of candy for the next week or so.
    Love and blessings to you my friend. So happy you are back. Joyce

  • sunny day
    November 2, 2005
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    Jim, Thank you bro so much for the applause and the wonderful comment. Such a lovely compliment I am smiling like right now. You didn't take long to find the entry I posted in the other contest. I hope I will see your name in this too.
    Thank you also for the best wishes, they are greatly appreciated. Love and blessings to my extended family. Joyce


  • Starhiker
    November 2, 2005
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    Bravo, sis! You've described yourself exactly how I pictured you. Loved the acrostic of your name! The rhyme and flow was perfect. Have you entered the contest where you write a poem about how you got your AP-name? Good luck in this contest, Joyce!! Jim


  • DamnUnique
    November 2, 2005
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    LOVELY

    Sorry, sorry, sorry!!! Sorry for not commenting on your works for such a long time. I was just too busy initially and right now, I've just recovered from a dumb fever. But here, I'm back again.
    So, that's an acrostc for yourself? IT'S PERRRRRRRRRFECT! A rhyming one at that! Awesome! And lemme just add one more thing, not to the acrostic but just something from my side: Joyce is the one who brings JOY to all. Not really clever but still, that's what my overtaxed brain made up.
    Keep writing and here I go to check out your other new creations.


    P.S.: How was your Halloween? 'Bestest'?
    Edited on Nov 02 because 'I don't know how to spell '.

  • sunny day
    November 2, 2005
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    grannyeri, Thank you so much for that lovely comment. It is plain but I think I'm sort of a plain type of person. Down to earth. I'm very happy you enjoyed it and again I say thank you.
    Love and blessings to you, today and always. Joyce


  • grannyeri gold member
    November 1, 2005
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    This is so easily written, and so easy to read and understand, very well put, how simple a thought can mean so much!

  • sunny day
    November 1, 2005
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    Bethany, Thank you for the wonderful comment. I hope you do decide to enter. I bet you could come up with something great for your name. It is a beautiful name indeed. Love and blessings to you, today and always. Joyce


  • MrsPepper
    November 1, 2005
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    Very lovely and sweet. Good job. Yeah this seems like a neat contest too!


  • Pookiebubu
    November 1, 2005
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    Nope, I didn't enter this contest, yet, but I might! Just finished posting a contest of my own.

  • sunny day
    November 1, 2005
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    Deborah, Thank you so much for the applause and the lovely comment as well. I can't say I'm perfect. That would be my first mistake. LOL A great compliment though and I am humbled by your words. Thank you also for the best wishes.
    I didn't notice your name there, I'll have to go back and look.
    Love and blessings to you my friend, today and always.
    Joyce

  • sunny day
    November 1, 2005
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    Linda, Thank you so much for the applause and the lovely comment sis. I have to giggle about the neat and dainty thing though. I'm neither of the two. LOL
    I am happy though and that's what matters to me. Thank you again. Love ya sis, Joyce


  • Pookiebubu
    November 1, 2005
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    This is just perfect! Just like you. So simple and to the point. I loved it! Good luck in the contest!


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    November 1, 2005
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    nice work Joyce and great poem fits you too a , your poem is so neat and dainty..it does remind me of you..great job! Linda

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