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You dont know me

No...i bet you dont know what really makes her laugh or even the difference between when shes faking it or truly being sincere.
I bet you dont know that her favorite popsicle flavor is cherry or the fact that she loves cuddling and having all the attention.
I bet you dont know that she hates thunderstorms and loves dancing or how much she loves being with her best friend and laughing and how much she truly enjoys being happy.
I bet you dont know how many tears shes cried, or how much she doubts herself everyday.
I bet you dont know how ticklish she is on her sides and how it drives her crazy when you smile and look into her eyes.
I bet you dont know what makes her heart beat faster and slower at the same time or how beautiful she really is.
No...i bet you dont know me.

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Written November 1st, 2005

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  • Ledford
    November 1, 2005
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    Wow! I have a poem similar to yours. And you are right. NO one knows who anyone is. We all have a differnt personality and no one can get inside of us to know how we feel. Awesome work. Keep it up!


  • forbidden-colour
    November 1, 2005
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    awsume !!!

    gd poem hun! its very effective keep writting !
    xxsophiexxx

  • blackroses16
    November 1, 2005
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    i love this poem...it really stands out and i can relate to it...no one will ever know who someone REALLY is...awesome poem