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I HAVE READ: YOUR SMILE & MOST HAPPY BY: BASEBALL'S ANGEL
I HAVE READ: New Light by: Shank Butcher
I HAVE READ: Falling Apart by: socially inept
Written November 1st, 2005
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A most wonderfully sweet write for the one you love! Loved this! Thank you for sharing and for yet another beautiful entry into the contest!
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This is in one word amazing! It's so sure, so powerful and most of all it feels so close to me... Very beautiful write indeed!
Love, me
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Good Luck
wow this is a very very good poem you can feel the passion comeing of the page(kind of) Good Job and Good Luck in the Contest. -Tressie- -
another awesome write
wow wonderfuly done... parts of this poem i feel... the being so far away from the one you love... the need to be with someone so bad it aches.. it keeps you up at night... this was awesome ... and love the pic... great write.. -
GREAT WRITE!
This is another poem that has undergone transformation in the light of poetic embelishments.I admire the word flow and imageries.Wow!This one makes men without partners to chuckle in awe and wishes that they too could be loved as expressed in this poem of yours. -
wonderfully powerful!
Woah, that's powerful!!!! I love it! I love how the rhymes flow from line to line. I love it, I'm not a fan of love poems, but I do like it. It's fantastic! keep up the awesome poems! I'll read as many as I can.
~Ash~
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