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A plan of fury

your plan of fury
without disguise
is as worthless
as a convicted
mans lies

your taste less science
has all ways brought
me suspense

your waste less
souls is forever
buried in a
endless tole

your mocking
friendship
will drive
you away
when you
come to play

I will not
bring your
existence to
its end
that would
take more time
than i have to
spend.

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Written November 1st, 2005

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  • looneyeclipse
    July 8, 2006
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    FYI, my poem derived partly because I was having a conversation with someone, and part of what was said was used in the poem as a joke. So, the person I was chatting to, and myself totally understand the context, unlike everyone else, who are ignorant of that fact. So, let's just say the stupidity is on the other foot, namely yours FairiesXWearXBoots.

    But thanks for the comment, it's nice to know people form their own opinions, and don't go around bashing poems in order to stick up for their friends, who are only posting negative comments to garner points, and could care less about anyone else but themselves.


  • NotMyShadeOfGray
    November 1, 2005
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    that is awesome!! i've felt this way with a few people actually and you really got it down in a few simple lines. rock the fuck on Kate.
    s and s
    ~Kambodia