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Fjiggle Pheinstorim

Born to die,
Dead now.

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Bhhhhig.
Written September 19th, 1868

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  • lordmonkey
    November 3, 2005
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    This is such a great and very moving poem that I just must tell you how much I love it. The first time I read it, it brought tears to my eyes and I had to sit down and ponder everything it meant. The second time, I sat down and truly felt the emotion that was packed into every one of the words in this beautiful poem. The third time, I really began to feel the true beauty of the poem. By the sixth read-through, I was on the verge of breaking down. This is much too beautiful a poem to be confined to simple applause. If I could, I'd promote this poem to the top of the featured list. It is so beautiful that I hope it will survive the tests of time and become a relic for ages to come.