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Starhiker

Starhiker

Starhiker is my AP-name,
you wonder whence it really came?
This is the story, and it's true,
it is not taken from the blue.
I am a Star Trek fan by heart,
you understand whence came first part?
Hitch-Hiker's Guide was my first book,
and from it I then "hiker" took.
I never knew that it would fit,
like hand in glove it seemed to sit.
I am a Starhiker for good,
I walk the stars, misunderstood.

© Jim T. Henriksen
November 1st, 2005

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This poem is entered into artistinside 's contest "Your Name" as a prewrite.
Written November 1st, 2005

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  • Starhiker
    August 2, 2006
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    Hi, Shirley! Nah, I don't think Kirk would have let me aboard, as my alter ego is John Pike, descendant of Christopher Pike, the first captain of USS Enterprize. That is why John Pike has his own ship, as you will see in the poem named John Pike. Thanks for the comment. Jim


  • XxGoldenxXDawnxX
    August 2, 2006
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    Starhiker.. a hike and a trek.. pretty much the same thing.. though somehow I can't see Cap'n Kirk stopping to let you on board the starship. I dunno about Picard though.. he seems a bit more easy going eh?


  • Starhiker
    February 21, 2006
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    Hi, Gennelle! Thanks for the comment, and the applause, I appreciate it alot! Jim


  • Maatkara gold member
    February 21, 2006
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    Haha! Very cute! Yes, it does fit. Nicely done, Jim!

    ~Gen


  • Starhiker
    February 2, 2006
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    Hi, Cyber! Thanks alot, both for the comment, and the applause! I really appreciate it! Jim


  • Cyber Artist Moderators member
    February 2, 2006
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    Well put I have trouble with English let alone any other language this explains the link in your name and a great picture to boot well done

  • Starhiker
    January 31, 2006
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    Hi, Rose! The contest this poem was in closed months ago, unfortunately I got no trophies for it. Thanks for your nice comment on my autobiographic poem, and thank you for your heartwarming applaud! Jim
    Edited on Jan 31, 2:12 p.m. because 'Duh! ...and thank you for your heartwarming comment!?! '.


  • PrincessOfFire
    January 31, 2006
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    Very good work on self description. It can be hard to do. good luck in your contest.
    Rose

  • Starhiker
    January 9, 2006
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    Hi, Shahrzad! Well, this picture is a bit newer than the one on John Pike. Glad you enjoyed the story of my AP-name... Thanks for your great comment! Jim

  • Ir.muse
    January 9, 2006
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    I could see you there. Nice to meet you.
    This is a sweet poem.I always wanted to know where did you get that name from.
    Shahrzad


  • Starhiker
    January 9, 2006
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    No, don't be brief, I love long comments! Jim


  • Starhiker
    January 8, 2006
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    Hi, amateurpoetess! Thanks for your long, and very interesting comment! Live long and prosper! Jim


  • Starhiker
    November 16, 2005
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    Hi, timecube poet! Thanks for the comment, and the applause! Jim

  • Starhiker
    November 15, 2005
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    Hi, Navdeep! I am glad you like my poem explaining my AP-name! Thanks for whe wonderful comment, and the applause! Jim


  • DamnUnique
    November 15, 2005
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    What an explanation! Star-Trek? Nice choice. I like it too. Hitchiker's guide? No idea.
    But you certainly explained your name's origin in a remarkable way, Starhiker.
    Keep writing.

  • Starhiker
    November 10, 2005
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    No, you didn't miss it, you commented on November 1st. Just View All, and you will see... But thanks for the comment, and the new applause. Jim


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    November 10, 2005
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    oh here is one I missed?
    how did that happen..lol..ty..lol, very nice star trek .. player.. wished you had the$ that flowed in to their ship huh? lol
    I like this poem gives poets the insight to your enthusism..thank you for sharing ...love your Oldest sis..Linda

  • Starhiker
    November 6, 2005
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    Thank you, Sonata Dreamer! I am glad you liked it. I don't care if I win trophies or not, I am just glad I can share my work with you all. I use contests as inpiration, to write new poetry... Sometimes I enter a prewrite, but then I do it to see if others like my style... Thanks for letting me have the opertunity to explain why I call myself Starhiker. Jim

  • Sonata Dreamer
    November 5, 2005
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    Oooh, this was neat. I like your name; it's really unique. Your described it well in a great poem. Wonderful job, thank you for entering my contest
    --Kimberlee

  • Starhiker
    November 3, 2005
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    Thanks, Udit! A tribute to myself? Nah, just a little explanation to all those who asked where I got the name Starhiker from, and didn't bother following the link to my webpage, where I explain it in detail. Thanks a lot for the comment, and the applause!! Jim


  • Raazi
    November 3, 2005
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    AMAZING! AMAZING! AMAZING! Jim, this is SO GOOD! I loved it. An awesome tribute to yourself. Even I read hitch hikers guide....not the whole of it, but yes, I liked whatever part I read. I plan to finish it as soon as I can. Once again jim, a WONDERFUL poem. I applaud you!

  • Starhiker
    November 2, 2005
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    Thanks, -Fae! You show good taste when you ADORE Hitch-Hiker's Guide to the Galaxy. Thanks for the comment, and the applause! Jim


  • fae
    November 2, 2005
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    Only sci fi i ADORE is hitchhikers. Good taste

  • Starhiker
    November 2, 2005
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    LOL! A Star Trek quote! I love it! Thanks a million for this wonderful comment, captain splat! Let's just hope you don't make a rain dance, the victory dance can be hard to do with fingers and toes crossed... Jim


  • captain splat
    November 2, 2005
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    Great

    "Well, it's life Jim but not as we know it" surely these words were meant just for you...A great write, crossing toes, fingers and perfoming Indian victory dance as you are reading this, good luck. David.

  • Starhiker
    November 1, 2005
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    Thanks, sis! Figured you would like this one, Joyce! Love ya, sis! Thanks for the comment and the applause! Jim
    Edited on Nov 01, 4:31 p.m. because 'Forgot...'.


  • Starhiker
    November 1, 2005
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    Thank you, SuB rOsA, for your comment, and your applause!


  • sunny day
    November 1, 2005
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    Bravo!!! Bravo!!! Bravo!!!

    Hey bro, Just got home and getting to all my messages now. I love this one. As we had talked about how you got your name it came as no surprise to me. After all I am your sis.
    You did an excellent job here, the rhyming and rhythm were perfect causing it to flow smoothly like hot butter on breakfast toast. Got ya there, no river to the sea. LOL
    All in all this is a fantastic write from The Amazing Starhiker, and it certainly gets my applause as I'm standing and cheering you on bro. Best wishes in the contest. Love and blessings today and always, Joyce

  • -SuB rOsA-
    November 1, 2005
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    This is brillient..


  • Starhiker
    November 1, 2005
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    Thanks, morbidkitten... I appreciate your comment. Jim

  • xXmorbidkittenXx
    November 1, 2005
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    aww...thats really cute, i love the ending and it has great rhythm. i really like it! xo


  • Starhiker
    November 1, 2005
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    Thanks for your comment, Linda! Cross my toes to win the contest. Jim

  • misticmoonlite gold member
    November 1, 2005
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    nice one here ..good rhythm and good flow, nice structure of the poem and ..wish you the best in the contest..Linda

  • Starhiker
    November 1, 2005
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    Thanks, Kitty! I am so glad that you like it. Yes, you should enter the contest, so that we can learn why you call yourself Bride Of Hate. Thanks for the comment, and applause! Jim


  • Bride Of Hate
    November 1, 2005
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    Awww this is amazing! I really like this! I might enter! Keep it up!
    One love,
    kitty xxx

  • Starhiker
    November 1, 2005
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    Thanks, Maria! I am glad you like it, and I cross my toes to win (need my fingers for writing )... Thanks for the comment, and for the applause! AP-daddy Jim


  • Ray Von
    November 1, 2005
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    Wow, this is so funny and fun to read!! I think u did a very good job with the rhyming, tis excellent.
    And you won't need luck 4 the contest with this piece, you'll get the gold for sure.


  • Starhiker
    November 1, 2005
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    Thanks, Jess. Glad to enlighten you about where it came from. Thanks for the comment! Jim

  • Naraku No Hana
    November 1, 2005
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    This is such a fantastic poem! It flows beautifully and i love it. I wondered where you got your name from.

  • Starhiker
    November 1, 2005
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    Thanks for the great comment, Storic! About the line you commented, this viking does walk. Walking is ofcourse a metaphore here... Thanks for the applause aswell! Jim


  • Storic
    November 1, 2005
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    good

    Well going by this poem, my little offering, which is still in the making, was bang on target. The only exception is the last line:

    "I walk the stars, misunderstood." - no Viking ever walked

    Good poem though, flows pretty well and is self-explanatory. I shall applaud it - so there!
    Edited on Nov 01, 8:29 because 'y oh y'.

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