Anger
What would you say
to a cup of tea
on a Saturday afternoon?
Does not matter
tea cannot hear.
It just sits and steeps
like an angry man
waiting to be consumed.
Author notes
Written November 1st, 2005
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I suppose it does, really. Don't really think about it like that, but a very good point
. Silly but very true. I don't know if it's philosophical, or jocular in meaning, but can be taken as both hehe
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Wow.
I love how this made me think of an angry man because I connected it mostly with the "tea cannot hear" because an angry man cannot hear. OoOo very very lovely.
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nice
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I disagree with Christopher Harder. This is perfect. It paints an image. Well done and good luck
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too short
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You've painted a detailed image upon my iris with this short poem... I like the metaphor you've also embedded with the words, very well done
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