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Different Person

You walk into the room
I don't know what to do
now I'm a different person
all because of you

I don't know how to act
i can't seem to speak
my mouth won't form the words
my knees start go weak

i want to look over at you
and see if your looking at me
but every time i do
my thoughts run free

you talk with your friends
and all i hear is bits and pieces
something about football and school
my heart rate slowly decreases

you get up to talk
and share your thoughts
in some ways your like me
but not a whole lot

I start to talk to my friends
my words spill out
I'm talking way to fast
who knows what about

Now its time to go
i catch one last glimpse of you
as soon as i leave, though
my brain suddenly knows what to do

Author notes

i did this one on the love option lol.  yeah you know how when you like someone when you see them you have no idea what to do so you start talking like a hundred words per minute and can't seem to stop talking cause your so nervous? or when you see them and sometimes you can't even talk at all? lol this is about that so yeah. hope you like it! i couldn't think of a title so if you have any suggestions better than the one i have now, please tell me!
Written October 31st, 2005

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  • XhiddenxBEAUTYx
    November 2, 2005
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    this is very awesome! I can totally relate!!

  • smileygurl
    November 1, 2005
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    This is a great poem, beth! Thanks for entering my contest!