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His Secret

I'm still just the girl,
    who helped you break her heart,
  the accomplice to her tears.
Holding onto all your are,
and all we'll never be.
   Shattered innocence,
teared apart at the seems,
   virgin faith tested by those crystal blues.
We're swimming in the lies,
    we refuse to say are fake,
        and I can't believe I settled,
  for being just your secret.

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it sucks.. my head is just so messed up.. that everything is jumbled up and comes out at once...
Written October 31st, 2005

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  • Question
    November 2, 2005
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    definitely does not suck. I hope ur doing ok....

  • sweetheart4rain
    November 1, 2005
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    beautiful babe!!..i luved it..im glad you posted it cause its G-R-E-A-T..luv you lots
    -britt


  • mysticlabyrinth
    November 1, 2005
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    wow. lol all i can say is wow


  • LemonDropAngel
    November 1, 2005
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    fabulous job


  • Painted Warrior
    November 1, 2005
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    Wow Great write, I love it. good job its sad but shows great emotion. Sometimes when your heads all messed up a;; u can do is just sit and let it all out. sometimes its the best poems that are made when we just let it all come out.... Sorry im rambleing on, but good work I love it and hope u have better luck in the future.


  • bluidbabiegirl
    November 1, 2005
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    I LOVE IT....

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