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You left in such a hurry,
I could not say "Good bye".
My heart is filled with pain,
And tears have filled my eyes.
You were a good man
Who always took the time,
To lend a helping hand
Without wanting a dime.
You told me you were 'sick'
And someday you would go,
You tried to prepare me;
I wasn't ready though.
I miss you so very much,
I find it hard to sleep;
The memory of your face,
Just keeps on haunting me.
I didn't get enough time
To share my life with you,
Alone I am, without your love;
Now what am I to do?
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Author notes
*sigh*... I miss him.
Written October 31st, 2005
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oh man. this was heartbreaking.
sadness was hidden behind each word. you did a beautiful job.
great job on the rhyme too.
thanks and all the best
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awwww
i know unfortunately how this feels wishing for more time to have shared with a loved one, regretting lost time. . .you've conveyed a lot of feelings that i can relate to about how i feel about someone special to me as well. great job on this one, again. . .and i am sorry for your loss.
-tony
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sweety you are not truely alone his love will forever live on deep inside your heart and his memories will always be a part of you and him together. Im so sorry for your loss hun. Know you are in my prayers and thoughts.
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Oh babe!
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Thanks again Timothy.. I don't really think anything can comfort me right now. I mean, I fake it real good.. lol.. but it's when I'm sitting at home that it hits me bad...or when I'm playing with Austin, he looks just like his daddy. They say God doesn't give you anything that you can't handle.. but this is just terrible...
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I don't know what to say to comfort you my dear friend, only that you have the little one that is a part of him, and you can let him live through your heart and memories through both you and the babies. There are no words to express how I truly wish things worked out better for you. Much love I send, in hopes you know many do care for your sweet soul!
-Timothy The Poetic Weaver
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