The pain I have inside me,
ripping and tearing me viciously.
Past memories come rushing in.
These echoing screams taunt
me in my head. I much
rather die instead.
Do you not see or understand I am reaching
out for your hand. Come with me and you will
see the pain and fear that consumes me.
It is a kind of presence that never
dies my yesterday is my
tomorrow.
Left behind are trails of scars its an inevitable
death to those who seek. As I bang my
head against the wall.
Pain is all that I find, no time to rewind being
caught inside my own mind. Cannot gain lost time,
sends shivers down my spine.
You have heard my plea. Now do you see?
I am lost in the maze that’s in my head of
the past that controls my life.
Written By,
BrendaKaye 2005
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Written October 31st, 2005
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Thanks penman for your comment. I was amazed to see an angel with black wings myself normally they are white...God bless Brenda
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Wow, what a picture you added to this poem. You normally never see anyone with wings that isn't wearing white. What a great pictuire. Your poem was great. Very sad, but full of some very moving verses. -
I was once you
if you only knew
my dark angel flew
Yolanda from death's pew.
Yo Yo Yo Yolanda
whose one sole agenda
was to defend her
friend, myself, from a,,,
Life of living death
failing my very best
beset by horrible tests
she refused no less.
Your write, my life
together both turn right
ending up inside night
sharing the same fight.
Thanks for your gift. Happy Xmas -
We love her too! being emotional is good, it cleanse the soul.
So it is not silly or goofy, it just says she really cares. God bless Brenda -
My passion My niece sent me this IM "I love everyone. I love you all. Boy I'm acting silly. Later on I'll be embarassed. Screw it that is then and this is now. I love you guys. Ciao now."
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Dark and sad, but hey, she like this kind of poetry. She is very lucky to have a uncle like you. God bless Brenda
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Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari
With gifts like these wrapped in black silk, what a beautiful Birthday for my niece.
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Thanks Tiffany for popping in and taking a peek and taking the time to comment on my poem. Much
and Respect Brenda
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Great poem and gorgeous picture... It really helps with the imagery of the poem. Best of wishes and good luck!
Tiffany -
No problem...!!
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Thanks Jelly Beans, for the support and understanding were I coming from. Much Respect Brenda
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Thanks choirAngel for the support and applauding my poem.
Much and Respect Brenda
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aaww that is sad, sorry that things have not been good with you, hope you feel better, nice picture and nice write, keep up the awesome poetry!!!
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Its hard when pain overwhelms us so deeply, it affects every function of us. I know how you feel. This is really well done!! Best wishes on the contest.
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Thanks Jade I am glad you love it. Much and Respect Brenda
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WOW!!! thats brilliant!!! i love it so much!!! wow i don't know what to say! well done!!!
love jade
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