Perfect imperfections
Beauty inside
But not so much in her reflection
She's not thin or
Magazine Pretty
She's too busy
Dancing
and day dreaming
To hear anything
What anyone
has to say
Author notes
Um.....what to say. It wasn't suppose to ryhme, but some parts did. I guess that's all.
Written October 31st, 2005
What did you think
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Hmm weirdly this is really good!! I loved it,and it makes sense,well to me it does lol.I love dancing.But i think the main meaning of it was pretty good,great write on this. ~Laura
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I suggest that you put 'what' in between 'to hear [what] anyone has to say'. Also, I couldn't read it- I had to highlight as it was so light.
Anyway, I liked this poem. It was nice and hopeful and it was a nice, happy and healthy poem which was unusual and a nice change
All the best,
Thank you for your comment
Pozo
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well deal with it i did, your first line is more abstract then the rest and really sets up for a poem that is going to be mush deeper then this poem was, no ofense ment or anything but that's the way i see it, but it is a good write and it flows really well,
jo
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