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Three Words

The fire crackled peacefully throughout the night; the warm, orange glow caressing entwined ashen flesh sensually.

Kira was staring intently into a pair of arctic eyes that shone with hidden love. Her hands wandered over his flesh in a daze, finding it odd to love him as strongly as she had once hated him.

Sharazon ran a hand over Kira's cheek, feeling her erubescent gaze seeing into his very soul. Never had he felt this strongly for anyone before. Holding her was like holding something as precious as pure innocence itself.

Three words he wanted to say were left unsaid.

Author notes

Sharazon is copyrighted to Opaque Beauty. <3

Guess where and when this takes place1 Go ahead! GUESS!
Written October 31st, 2005

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  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    October 31, 2005
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    No, there will not be anymore added. It's a drabble. 100 words. If I added anymore, it wouldn't be a drabble. I'm glad you liked itt hough and thank you for commenting.

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    October 31, 2005
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    Heh...Thank for letting me know. Damn grammar. Thank you for your comment. <3
  • angelsmiracle
    October 31, 2005
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    This is very beautiful writeen. I loved it. Is there going to be any more added? if so let me know.

  • October 31, 2005
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    What a pretty word. And this..is beautiful, just like the others. One thing though..
    Three words he wanted to say was left unsaid.
    I'm pretty sure it should be "were left unsaid". Maybe? Hm.

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    October 31, 2005
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  • Yunaleska gold member
    October 31, 2005
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    Aww!!!! This is so sweet and so sad! Go Zon, go! Say those words!!!

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    October 31, 2005
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    You're RIGHT! It's based on the sghort story we're writing about their meeting...It's after she falls in lvoe with him and when Malise tries to punish her!

    Thank you for all your words, love. They make me giggle and moan with pleasure.

  • Victoria of Aragon
    October 31, 2005
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    "erubescent" .. ! Erubescenterubescenterubescenterubescenterubescent!!! .. ~ Giggle. ~ Aren't new words DELIGHTFUL!?

    Ah, yes.. Now that I've spammed the word erubescent about.. Ehh'.. How many times, I shall get to what I actually wanted to say about this. ♥

    I'm going to guess.. That.. This.. Is... Before.. Kira leaves? o o; But, that's just going by a post you had on FR, lmao.. So.. I'm probably wrong. e e; Uhhh.. Next!

    It's pretty. ~ Nod, nod. ~ I love your drabbles oh so very much. <3 They make me giggle, and of course, INSPIRE.

    Pea Ess xXx LOOK AT ALL THE WORDS I TYPED! All for you, babe!
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