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So proud

Hopes and dreams ripped from my hand
Eyes filling with tears she said wait here
And off she went
Will my dreams come back having high hopes
I see her in the crowed making her way back to us
Oh yes  her hands full of sacks
I was so proud of my big sister that night as always
And you know I think our sacks were quite  a bit fuller
My love for my big sister grew more throughout our lives
Not just for the candy but for the way she loved us
And took such good care of us

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Written October 31st, 2005

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  • Lil Miss New Shoes
    August 12, 2008
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  • Sunshine1
    January 18, 2008

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    love it

    owww I love this, its really good mom,
    I know your big sister loves this, and she is an awsome
    lady worrior,and so are you! love you mom
    sunshine1


  • queen Moderators member
    July 12, 2007
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  • queen Moderators member
    August 1, 2006
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    I can picture her taking on the world for someone she loves


  • fourth coming
    November 8, 2005
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    GOOD JOB

    Thank you Sis for you comment and applaud lots of my love Patty


  • Your Hine Us
    November 6, 2005
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    Nice poem to write about your big sis,and I guess I am late but congratulations on another win .Doris.


  • FifthDove
    November 2, 2005
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    Congratulations


  • Dark-Princess
    November 1, 2005
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    Sounds like how my big sis was too...(when she wasn't kickn my butt)...lol...I am glad you have each other! Congratulations on your win!
    Dark-Princess


  • Huntress silver member
    October 31, 2005
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    Congratulations

  • Warrior7
    October 31, 2005
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    This is a beautiful poem, so much love shared amongst your family makes me really want to be a part of it.
    Great poem loved reading it, thank you for sharing your thoughts

  • Group - Roggies
    October 31, 2005
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    You are all natural born fighters. I can picture her taking the candy back though A person always knows she has their backs Good luck in the contest


  • Huntress silver member
    October 31, 2005
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    I can just picture her taking the candy back from those nasty boys I have seen her do battle many times Good luck in the contest

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