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Child’s Play (Cinquain)





Candy,
For the taking
But only if children
Make good their promise “Give treats or
Get tricks".





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Written for the 'Happy Halloween - 2 Hour Contest' by Ava Noire
Did not win.
Written October 31st, 2005

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  • Elrenia
    November 1, 2005
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    Thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate both. And, I am glad you liked it.


  • grannyeri gold member
    November 1, 2005
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    So easy to read and understand. Well written and so Halloween, of course.

  • Elrenia
    October 31, 2005
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    You are too correct. Thank you for pointing that out. Yes, it is up to the sheller to pick their choice, but the promise is still the same: Give us treats, or we will give you tricks.
    Thank you for reading and commenting.


  • jantastic
    October 31, 2005
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    I always thought it was up to the person shelling out whether to offer a treat or ask for a trick.
    You're missing an end quote. This was a fun "quickie" contest.


  • Elrenia
    October 31, 2005
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    Thank you. Just one of the twistings in my mind. LOL


  • wishintreeUK
    October 31, 2005
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    Well Done Rous, a great Halloween cinquain

    ~Katie~


  • Ava Noire silver member
    October 31, 2005
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    LOL Good work Rous. The syllable count appears to be correct. The flow is smooth and makes for an enjoyable read. Thanks for entering.

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