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Celestial Insight

I close my eyes and see the sun,
Open them to see the moon.
Days and nights bleed together
As a celestial wedding night begins.
Walking streets I wish I knew
And meeting faces only seen in dreams,
I think long and hard on days past
And dreams lived during times
When new dreams were being made.
Your words cut like a knife,
Deep and continuous, always.
But sometime in the now,
Leaving behind the past,
I stopped feeling the pain.
It became like the beating of a heart;
It is always there, and keeps me moving,
Probably gives me a purpose to live.
But I don't hear it or feel,
At least not consciously.
So I close my eyes to see the sun,
Only to open them again to the moon.
Your words and thoughts like wisps of wind
Blowing through already barren trees.

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Written October 30th, 2005

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  • pattyann4500
    November 1, 2005
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    Such sadness in this. I see that you just wrote it yesterday, so I'm not at all surprised. I know that things will be just fine for you.

    I love the words as they flow so beautifully together to form a wonderful pool that has become your poem. You have a magic pen, my dear sister. Love and hugs, Patricia ♥


  • mrsfoss
    October 31, 2005
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    Wonderful

    Hi,Taur amandil:

    Ohhhh this is a wonderful poem so full of depth and emotion,this poem is very well crafted and you are truly a gifted poet,well done.



    mrsfoss


  • Faeleigh
    October 30, 2005
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    wow... This is a good poem. It was a little hard to follow and different people will get different things out of this when they read this. Great write I enjoyed reading it.