morning, green
dusty winged Moths clamberring up the
wall
two Eyes, watching
returning from their night flight
love is in the air (literally)
Author notes
Written October 30th, 2005
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Nicely descriptive. For my money, the word 'literally' is overkill and takes away the double meaning. good poem.
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Hey there Di
How are ya?
Yeah I haven't been able to write much recently... oh well....
Im glad you liked it -
seems this little cute writing brought the images of butterflys to my mind.....these little creatures a majestic touch of loves aura....the linger of their flight brings the freedom of loves touch.....magical and majestically they come sit on your hearts mind...bringing you thoughts of a loves first time....yes love is in the air.....and so are the morning bugs....very cute and soft thought you bring
Malabu -
Hi my friend it's a long time since I saw something of yours posted on featured, very nice little poem, enchanting to read, hope all is well with you, all the best, hugs Di
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