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I Love You

You stand by me now.
Screming your lungs out.
I scream back at you.
This is how it's supposed to be.
I love you.

I cut you hard.
Becuase you hurt me bad.
I yell at you now.
Because you make me so sad.
I love you.

I'm standing by you, holding this knife.
Yes, it's true.
I plan on taking your life.
This is only because,
I love you.

Everytime I stab your body.
You tell me stop.
Your blood is all over my hands.
I cannot stop.
I love you.

I lie here now, over you.
You dead, and I'm so sorry.
This is only because,
I love you.
I love you.

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I wrote this one a while ago. It's always been my favorite, I don't know why. (=
Written October 30th, 2005

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  • acoustic lovee
    October 30, 2005
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    wow. I dont really understand this poem but i absolutally love it. I can tell there is alot of emotiong and feeling in it..and even though i dont get it...thats a good thing....its very awesome and beautiful....i love love love it keep up the good work