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Tomorrow...

Yesterday was a nightmare
of thoughts and memories
of people and things
confusing me....

Today is a miracle
of joy and of laughter
of perfect good times
confusing me...

Tomorrow is a blur
of emotions not known
of good...or bad times...
confusing me...

But suddenly I realise
that none of this matters
as long as you are there
here...by my side...

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Written October 30th, 2005

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  • Merrigan
    March 24, 2006
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    Thank you Bronwyn for taking the time to read this and commenting.


  • Bronwyn
    March 20, 2006
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    *awwwww....this is sooo beautiful*
    "But suddenly I realise
    that none of this matters
    as long as you are there
    here...by my side... "
    - maak nie saak wat nie, daar sal altyd iemand wees wat by jou gaan wees deur als en net om te weet dat daar iemand is.....

    sorry about that, pretoria coming out of me..hehe..

    really enjoyed reading this!!


  • Legend silver member
    November 8, 2005
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    Hi Merrigan sometimes the shortness of words add to the strength of a poem , this is one of those cases.you could have wrote another ten stanzas and still not have added more to this.A great write,and one to set the reader to thinking how precious all of our days are.Without the bad the good do not stand out. well done

  • Jasmine Fox
    October 31, 2005
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    Powerful

    Short but very powerful. Great use of the refrain line. Quite thought provoking. Just goes to show that we should all take each day at a time and make the most of them as they come and go!


  • Janice M Pickett
    October 31, 2005
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    Good Effort

    This is the perfect example of how we cannot predict what is going to happen from one day to the next. One day sad the other happy. Thats life and you explained it very well.
    Great poem. I like short writing.
    It is easier to absorb and enjoy.
    Hugs
    Jan

  • jackz sally
    October 31, 2005
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    very good

    i can relate i feel like this alot


  • mrsfoss
    October 31, 2005
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    Great

    Hi,Merrigan:

    This is a great poem,I really like poem it is very well written and you are a very talented poet,well done.


    mrsfoss

  • Lacyte
    October 30, 2005
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    Hmmm .... very philosophical ... I like what you are saying, as well as the way you have said it. Very well written - short, but powerful, bringing the message straight across. I love it!

    Keep well.

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