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Waterfall Relief

Water

Wash her away
Flowing through
the streams
Too many burdens
is left to carry.

Clean

She rinses and
falls with relief
A gentle sleep
into the mind

Make anew

Deep breathe
& blow away
the past
with no influence
to the future

Releasing into
the better half
The Observer talking
though the conscience

Finally
Free from the torture
I held with my own self

It's done

Author notes

a very brief description of a meditaion experience.
but it was benefitial and i'm grateful for it.
Written September 19th, 2005

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