Curled up on the sofa
Wrapped in a blanket
Slowly fading off...
To a place
Where the breeze blows
lovingly through a field of lavender
To a place
That all live
in peace and harmony
To a place
Where dreams come true
and wishes are granted
To a place
I can set my heart free
to love without pain
To a place
I don't have to hide,
I can be free
To a place
Of soaring passions
and heart's desires filled
To a place
Away from absurd insanity
and silent chaos
A place far away
A place nonexistent
A place of fantasy
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Written October 30th, 2005
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Yes flowerpot, something we all want but will probably never have. So sad really when the possiblity for it all lies within us if we can just stop long enough to see the error of our ways and thus begin fixing them.
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Lola, I'm so pleased you enjoyed this piece. Thank you for your kind words.
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Darell I do believe you said it all. And said it very well I might add. I could not agree with you more
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Peace is a good thing though I will admit sometimes I would miss the hussle and bustle of all the never ending chaos. Otherwise I too would love a place like this for myself.
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Linda my dear I am already having alot of fun with this contest. My only regret is not having enough trophies for you all. I love this idea and yet I dread it. I sure hoper my friend is up to the challenge of judging this with me cuz it's gonna be tough.
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Celtic, a wonderful sensual poem, and so many fantasy /dreams can happen..good luck and have fun with this contest..Linda
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Please allow me to say once again....you my dear do have a wonderful way with words. Even your comments are astonishing. Thank you so much for your so very sweet words.
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This is a very passionate and powerful poem that holds the reader in a state of bliss within there own souls,It also makes
One feel that you your self have an angel inside of you who is waiting to sing out loud in that big heavenly choir up stairs,
This is a very brilllaintly penned poem of imagery and emotion
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Very effective write, i love the image you used. It really speaks of something i think we all want, but know that its just a fantasy land... Very well written, i like it a lot.
~Flowerpot
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wow this is good mad me feel at home, a certain peace with in myself...awesome write
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Enchanting
A beautiful place that resides in the hearts of the pure in spirit. A dimension of love passion and ecstasy! We need more
magic like this in the world. Our time on earth holds the promise of so many wonderful things. If only we would create
beauty instead of ugliness hatred and greed on the canvas of
life. Oh what a world this would be! An enchanting write!
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Excellent!
I want to go to this place, believe me, I've been trying every since I landed here by mistake..lol..
Thanks for such a peaceful read, I think we can all use this! Well, except those who don't like piece, and to my amazement, there are some..
Peace, much love to you and yours!
-Timothy The Poetic Weaver
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Yes, I believe it would be a much better place for all of us than where we are now. Unfortunately it is nonexistent. Perhaps one day we'll live in such a place or something that is close to it anyway. Thank you for your kind words, much appreciated.
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ohhh i bet that all of us will love to live in that place of fantasy!!! "a place far way, a place nonexistence, a place of fantasy, To a place Where dreams come true"
its really sweet , cuz just made me realise that we live in a hypocritic world, but if we could just be in that fantasy world we will be totally different than we are now...!
thanks for sharing
its a really good poem, makes everyone to think in themselves and anyone else!
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