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Left Lonely




In tears I write,
I relive,
I vent,
I release

My pen,
My paintbrush,
My paper,
My canvas

All coming together
Portraying my pain
With words of hurt
My inspiration

Behind the walls
Tucked away
So well protected
All cozy and sweet

Reinforcing daily
No escaping
The horrid emotions
Dwelling in my heart

My mind wonders
My mind questions
What went wrong?
Why so wrong?

Searching endlessly
An exhausting feat
No answers found
Instead I'm just left lonely

Author notes

Delving into the depths of loneliness and lovelessness.....
Written October 29th, 2005

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  • misticmoonlite gold member
    October 31, 2005
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    Another great write good choice..Keep up the excellent work..Linda


  • robert bolin
    October 30, 2005
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    A brilliantly penned poem of emotions and heart touching reason to the readers mind locked within the picture captured by an artist of poetic chime, to be or not to be is what the picture and the poem reminded me of a shakespear dillarium of images that locks the readers attention to this beautiful poem..thank you again for allowing me to read your work and enter your contest rob..


  • darell
    October 30, 2005
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    Melancholy

    In the stillness of your heart listen and the answers will come.
    They say that time heals all wounds. We need patients and faith
    in our future. Seasons do change and they will change for you.
    A melancholy write written with gentleness and elegance


  • flowerpot
    October 29, 2005
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    This is great celtic, i like this. You really made your reader feel your emotions, expressed really well. I love the bit about expressing your emotions through art and poetry, i thought you wrote that bit especially really well.
    Great work, keep it up!
    Flowerpot


  • Ethereal One gold member
    October 29, 2005
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    excellent writing

    Oh yes. I have been here so many times and wondered some of the same things you have put on paper. It is so sad to be left alone. We want love and it seems so elusive most of the time. I wish you the best and much happiness. I hope you can escape the loneliness.
    etherealforu

  • ocerus
    October 29, 2005
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    That should be "An exhausting FEAT." "FEET" are what are on the ends of your legs! This is nice though. This sounds corny - or like Clinton - but you do well at getting me to "feel your pain." Good job!

  • Cridle CC
    October 29, 2005
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    i also love this picture its beautiful!

  • Cridle CC
    October 29, 2005
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    that was really good i really like reading ur poems. ur one of my favorite writers one this web site! that was really good!!!

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