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Can't Take It Anymore




What's wrong with me?
Why do I do these things?
Not like it matters....
No one really cares

How could I let this happen?
When will I learn?
I guess I'll never learn
It's not worth it anyway

Always getting hurt
Why bother?
Pain is inevitable
My heart constantly bleeds

I give my heart away
And it gets shattered
Time after time
Over and over

Nothing changes
Same old results
Why keep trying?
It's too exhausting

I just can't do it anymore
This was the last time
No more pain
Never again

One more time
I wouldn't survive
The depth of pain
Too great to bare

All that is left
Would be shattered
Far beyond repair
I can't take it anymore

Author notes

Another look into myself and my current feelings on love....
Written October 29th, 2005

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  • darell
    October 30, 2005
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    Heartfelt

    Awww! I know the feeling too well. Heartache and disappointment.
    The world seems so cold and shallow. No one wants to commit
    to love anymore. Lust replaces love. Greed and selfishness
    replaces true devotion.
    All they want is what they can get out of you.
    I feel your pain. Look up my sister and follow your heart but
    also use your head in the future. Usually the signs are there
    warning us to stop go or pause. As usual we don't listen and go
    straight through the do not enter sign.
    Edited on Oct 30, 1:26 p.m. because ''.

  • Cridle CC
    October 29, 2005
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    OMG.This was great! I cant write like that. I wish i could! it went well together mine come out badly. i dont think i cant write well. i just do it to clear my mind. u must have written 4 a while cause that was REALLY good!! u shoul be proud of that one!


  • becks place
    October 29, 2005
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    Great imagery and feeling in this write...there are a few typos that are a bit distracting: S4 - get should be gets S5 - to should be too S7 to should be too


  • Vickie J
    October 29, 2005
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    Your sadness is inherent through this whole write. Love is risky-and more times than not, you get your heart broken. You need to protect it and not lay it out there for someone to stomp on.
    This was a nice solemn piece. Enjoyed reading it vj


  • XUnderXPressureX
    October 29, 2005
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    beautiful

    wow this is really beautiful! It just seems like a lot of people fell that way or at least say they do. ahywho great write.

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